by 2fast2quick
Nice story. Would have been better with more of a build up of the romance.
This was a very pleasant, heartwarming story and I suspect I'll come back to it again and again. The couple was believable and the roommate was a lifesaver. Great, immersive writing overall. Thank you for putting out such a wonderful, uplifting story!
Somehow I stumbled into this author on Lit. I am finding this author's stories verity entertaing and enjoyable to read.
Over a year posted on the site, and this is still my favorite erotic short story ever. Its beauty is in its simplicity; it's as pure a story as I've read. Many returns to this one are in the future.
a welcome change of pace from the usual fare here.
Romantic and erotic. Jenny is a person I would love to lose my virginity to her if I was still a virgin
Nice story. Many stories here only satisfy the sex drive, but yours here also satisfy that part that wants to experience what it feels like to be with a girlfriend. Your story is like the complete girlfriend experience.
i love both of your characters and would enjoy reading more about them...