All Comments on 'Jenny's Day'

This was hot. The second part was a little rushed. Maybe that could have been a chapter 2.

Bizarre; twisted, while well crafted. Still wrestling with what you wanted to “say/depict” here as you say outside your norm. Not to overthink; two episodes of intense, largely NonConsent/Reluctance sex despite final declarations in both cases. Applaud reaching out and creating erotically troubling mix. Not appealing to me, but my mixed reaction may be exactly what you wanted to achieve as a writer. Liked it, but didn’t. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Piece bridges “Exhibitionist and Voyeur” and “NonConsent/Reluctance”, maybe more toward the latter, but that is largely irrelevant. Despite intense sex and outrageousness, not particularly erotic — seemed rushed, rather helter skelter maybe by design.