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All Comments on 'Jenny's Journey Pt. 04'

by Nikkiejanes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WTF???

How the heck was that punishment? Steve got to go all 3 holes, seems as if he got off best, not worst.

NikkiejanesNikkiejanesover 4 years agoAuthor
Think about it

The punishment is Steve having to wait and wait and think he was getting none.

Jenny is not that evil to deprive him and by then was so worked up she didn't care

jaywill74xjaywill74xover 3 years ago

You need to keep to the same character names, confusing Paul's name for Andy breaks the story and the reader.

Campus77Campus774 months ago

So happy to see a further chapter. Jenny got her revenge but all four got something in return. Big winners!

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