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Click hereDan immediately went to the back of Jenny. He caught her waist as he fingered her pussy. She was leaking. Dan went in immediately. Jenny went, 'Fuck me harder.'
Tom was lying and watching Dan fuck Jenny. Jenny's boobs swayed as Dan laid in deep and thick. Tom got Jenny's hand and led it to his cock. Jenny could hardly grab his dick as she was pounded hard by Dan. Shortly, Dan came inside her. He laid down exhausted.
Jenny threw away her blindfold and looked at Dan. She kissed Dan. Dan saw her covered with cum. Jenny laid down exhausted.
A collective sigh of anxiousness and exhaustion went by as all three of them muttered under their breath, 'What the fuck just happened and what now?'
I dig it. Pick up the next chapter where hubby dozed off and Tom claims her with his recharged thicker tool.
It would have been better without the sharing with the boss. I mean as it was written and where it was heading with her getting more sexy anymore revealing if you leave out the sharing and have her do more she would have been slowly going from work video calls to a web cam show with the boss or other coworkers. Place that in the exhibition voyeur section and you have a real winner.
Your writing is fairly good, and the story started well, but the jump to blowjob and sex was unrealistic. It kind of jumped out of nowhere like you got impatient with your own story and gave up on the build up.
I would have preferred a little more detail in the sex itself too.