All Comments on 'Jen's Island Excursion'

amazinggggg 100%

gay af

Just wowzas. Fantastic.

Very good. Loved it. Makes me think about the first time I seduced my niece

Great build up!

So amazing. Loooove this fantasy it's very believable and natural and hot.

I hope there is more. I can’t wait to see how this story continues and how Jennifer blossoms under her uncle’s affection.

Oh wow. This was great, omg. The writing was incredible and it was extremely hot and bothering ahaha. Kudos!

We need the next part for this story!!! 💜

Your writing is amazing! The way you have with words, just the right amount of poetic to make it all feel visceral and real... I'm a fan!

how do you write like that? Does it take lots of practice? Your writing talent is phenomenal.

Excellent! Super hot seduction with perfect pacing. Just take my 5 stars!

WOW! One of the best stories ever.

Beautiful story. Please continue

Amazing. You describe feelings very poetically.

In the paragraph when he first touched her bikini bottom, I thought he had taken them off but then realized it was his fingers going down her leg.

I kinda wished the German had a run with her!

Through her thought processes how she internally rationalises her experiences is outrageous and flawed. You made the prose your unique own. I loved it.