All Comments on 'Jeremy's Mom's House Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awesome

Thoroughly enjoyed this series. Really poignant when Jeremy grew a pair and put an end to being used by his mom.

vrieseavrieseaover 10 years ago
Great read

Three years is a long time, but glad you are back. Nice continuation seems you've gotten more erotic over that time period. Five stars of course.

ansdguyansdguyover 10 years ago
I just can't understand...

Why on earth would Kate be missing Jack, the guy that got drunk and beat her, brutally dry ass fucked her and cheated, just as she had him? Then she spends the next, what, 16 years pinning over the bastard and forgoing the men that would give her a satisfying sexual life and possibly more. I will say that this chapter, Kate was a lot less schizophrenic than in the first two crazy chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What ever happened...

... to the first chapter? It was there a few days ago, then for a short time it was listed but tagged as waiting approval, now it's just gone.

rightbankrightbankover 10 years ago
I had hopes, but

It just kept getting worse. Sorry I wasted my time.

GriffyD_BoyGriffyD_Boyover 8 years ago
A bit of a depressing ending

Overall it was good, but the story took a darker turn this chapter than I was expecting. I still enjoyed it overall, but I'm not sure I fully loved that turn of events.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
fcked up u motherfucker

the bitch deserve this and the son of the bitch don't deserve the best girl beth. she and her son are two fucked up people they deserve to die.

HoltarenHoltarenalmost 6 years ago
Fanbloodytastic.

What a brill story. Would be awesome to see more chapters, but I guess that would be somewhat difficult.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

hated the ending - very down on his mother. otherwise a very well-written and erotic adventure

sexsutrasexsutraover 1 year ago

Terrible writing. Terrible ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awful ending. First two chapters were great but this was not a good follow up.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

That’s a long gap 2010-2013 between stories only to end it the way you did! I would have killed him off in a DUI accident. I was crazy curious as what personal experience would have caused such a gap between stories. Even had me wondering about there being some truths to this story.

Anyway, great story, great twat twist, LoL Plot twist regarding mother’s indiscretions in her early married life…

NaughtyCaroline68NaughtyCaroline6811 months ago

I think there is some pretty harsh reactions to this ending, I think every great story has some tragedy and this was better than Jeremy dying in a car wreck or becoming an abusive alcoholic. We need Jeremy’s Cock goes to College as the next segment.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You know, I read some of the comments and don't agree with them about a terrible ending. Quite the opposite. It certainly sounded like he grew up to me. He realized he was on a path of self destruction, he wanted his own life, he learned to be more confident, and how to be a good lover. But also how to be his own man. And luckily, how NOT to be. I hope that he has a great life with Beth and I hope mom has come to terms with her own life and starts to live again. It was tragic what happened with her husband, but it's time to let Jack rest in peace and move on. I think, in this case, this was the best course of action for all involved. I hope Mom realizes how great a friendship she can have with Beth and still have her son in her life. It was quite the unexpected twist in plot, and I liked it a lot

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