All Comments on 'Jeri's Love... Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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Can’t wait for more!

Floydman1Floydman1about 5 years ago
Can't wait for more!

Sweet, well-written, and sexy as all getout. When are you publishing chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

cartman's mom from south park

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

oh this story reminded me (again !) i wish i'd could've been myself much younger . great start please continue . sarah xoxo. thank you.

TexasBoy1776TexasBoy1776about 5 years ago
Well done

Amazing start, can’t wait to read more!

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothabout 5 years ago
A Delectable Tease of a Story

Nice opening for your story line. Loved the set up. Will be watching for your next installment.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Was really good

I felt the emotions. Your writing transported me to be with the characters.

Then you totally spoilt the story with the crap at the ending. What a load of shite.

Hopefully future chapters will ignore the parents completely to concentrate on your two main characters.

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hi..im Maryanne, a 60 year-old trans woman. I am in a relationship...just here to play. I do not pic or skype or kik or stand in the window so you can peep me (perv) so dont ask.

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