by Transbabe55
Sweet, well-written, and sexy as all getout. When are you publishing chapter 2?
oh this story reminded me (again !) i wish i'd could've been myself much younger . great start please continue . sarah xoxo. thank you.
Nice opening for your story line. Loved the set up. Will be watching for your next installment.
I felt the emotions. Your writing transported me to be with the characters.
Then you totally spoilt the story with the crap at the ending. What a load of shite.
Hopefully future chapters will ignore the parents completely to concentrate on your two main characters.