All Comments on 'Jerry becomes Jill Pt. 02: Entrapment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Female led is best

Jerry is soooo lucky cant wait to see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
again

I hate unfinished stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
anon

Too short. Chapters need to be longer otherwise people lose interest. Great story though so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hoping for more

I love the way you set the story up . It's very seductive and sexy. Can't wait to read more about Jerry and Rikki

secretLacesecretLaceover 4 years ago

I really like the slow sensual build up and the more gentle tone in the piece. I agree with the others... We need more.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
loving it

I am really enjoying the story of Jerry and Rikki and I am quite intrigued so far, the possibilities are exciting, thank you, TG Tiffany

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