All Comments on 'Jerry Ch. 06: Getting A Do'

by pappybones95

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donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 5 years ago
Sorry, parts 1-5 were better

I really think you got bored or distracted and wandered off into the weeds here. The story had enough characters already, and plenty of as-yet-unexplored possibilities. I'm waiting for the doctor to fuck Jerry, and Tom to do the mother.... Sidney should have some sex, too; maybe he and Tom could DP Jerry and his mom?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Really Lovely

I thought it was a really exciting story and voted 5 points for it.

Cant wait for the next episode.

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pappybones95pappybones95about 5 years agoAuthor
Correction

In the interest of accuracy a correction must be made.

Diane took 101 to 280 to get to her pedicure appointment.

I humbly apologize for the error and hope it didn't ruin the story for anyone.

Pappy Bones

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