All Comments on 'Jerry's New, Young, Eye-Candy Ch. 02'

by LaPatitMort

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RockynMeRockynMeabout 15 years ago
Good story so far...

Has the makings of a very good continuing tale. I will look for more chapters in the future.

libertarianlibertarianalmost 15 years ago
Next

When is chapter 3 due? Sounds like a harem in the works!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
awesome as usual

more please

LewunremLewunremabout 14 years ago

This story was amazing...but again i wish it carried on..i mean i sensed something really hot between robin an sabrina.. do you intend to do a 3rd?

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 13 years ago
Another excellent offering

You are a talented writer. There, hopefully, is a 3rd and perhaps 4th installment in the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good

Why did you stop you should finish the story it has a long way to go and your a very good writer

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