All Comments on 'Jess and Twerp'

Great writing and very hot. I was a little worried Jess was going to just humiliate Danny but I thought you did a nice job with this.

I love this story, please write more to this story

Enjoyed your story. Very hot and well written :)

Thanks for reading and thanks for the positive feedback.

please continue

That "Siska" thing is just fucking weird, made it look the brother is mentally challenged or something which just ruins the whole thing (like the older sister is abusing him). Couldn't even make it past the first page. Just read a couple lines out loud with that word and it becomes apparent nobody in their minds would use that phrase.

Thank you for the insightful and helpful comment.

Missing tag: Impregnation

Missing Tag: Group Sex

Missing Tag: Creampie

Missing Tag: (Soft or Gentle) Femdom

I quit reading it once she was being a bitch and dominant over her weak brother,, almost like he had issues

and she was glad of it

sad 😞

I enjoyed this and I’d read more of this foursome

Great standalone story of a loving and consensual foursome. As long as Danny and Jess don’t produce any offspring, I don’t see any issues with the relationship that they choose to have.