All Comments on 'Jess' Fantasy Ch. 02'

You should check the edits to your story. There is a line on page 2, “……Joe's breathing picked up as I stroked his dick slightly ….” That seems out of context. Who is Joe? I suggest that you recheck and correct as needed, then resubmit it. Otherwise very hot.

Love the story. I would love to have a girlfriend like Jess who would set me up to take a cock in my ass while watching and encouraging.