by Sammycolto
Very nice and Detailed. I haven't enjoyed reading a story like that in a long time. I look forward to your next story. Maybe a sequel when Pierre gets to L.A. while Jessica is talking to her husband? Pease keep writing. 5 stars!
Damn, you really are a master at this! I've been a big fan for a long time. I discovered your work a few years ago on aff, then later on chyoa. Your LAs Finest storys are legendary and this is another example showing you didn't lost one bit of your skill. I hope you keep on writing cause I can't get enough from your works!
Wow, great story.
Can we have a sequel please? Does Jack get a treat when she realises his view?