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Anonymousover 16 years agoI loved your last line.
"Then we'll have to keep on trying 'til we get it right." That could mean 1 of 2 things: 1) that she was bisexual w/a strong leaning toward being staight, or 2) she just loved to fuck, men, women, ANYONE!
smoothboiover 16 years agoYou are fantastic.
Great choice to move to a 3rd person perspective, but while still keeping your unique style. I am thrilled that you keep writing.
Anonymousover 16 years agogreat story line
interesting and hot use of the male role in a lesbian scene.
A follow up could be great based on your writing style ???
Anonymousover 16 years agoEvery one a 5
Every new story you post is an event in my erotic life, giving me new fantasies to savor, vivid new images to imagine. Thank you.
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