by KS0311
@Iamcurious999, are you living in the 18th century? wtf is actually wrong with you.. lack of a woman's touch?
Meh.
Guy with unstoppable power, turns girls into mindless sex dolls. Sounds like something written by a guy who just hit puberty. The sex scenes were mediocre, the plot was blander than mediocre, and the characterization was non-existent. 3/5
In an age of feminist lunacy and gender equality psychosis, it is so DELIGHTFUL to see the portrayal of happy, submissive, and beautiful "slave" women who exist to serve and obey men! Any man (and quite a few women) become tired of bitter, frigid, and miserable modern women with their "liberation" and "empowerment" nonsense inundating TV, social media, and schools and workplaces everywhere.
We need something better. A lot BETTER!
Five Stars!
of Jessica effect her ability to do her job?
KS0311,
i was wondering if you have anymore news on a release date for the next chapter. I believe I have read twice already that you would have something up in a couple of weeks. I'm a fan that is hoping you post a new set of chapters soon. However, if you have chosen to stop writing this story please inform those of use who have been waiting so as you not wait in vain.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent
Sorry for the absence. I've created an outline for the next chapter and have begun writing. I'm looking forward to getting it on here, so check back over the next couple of weeks. Thanks!
I am eager to see how Jessica's parents react when they learn their daughter has been turned into a mindless sex slave.
This was awesome, I really enjoyed this story, it had both the fall and the turning of the protagonist. I would love to read more about how Michael advances his career by letting other partners and clients use Jessica. Then possibly another story after that one where there is a further decent into depravity ( protitution, porn actress, gangbangs, sex clubs ect.) as Michael becomes bored with his power over her and seeks an even bigger rush ego by further humiliating her
I have read stories about hypnosis before, but very few from the standpoint of the one being hypnotized. This was very well done. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
That was definitely one of the better stories I've read.
Good work! I hope to see more stories from you. :)
If this is the quality I can expect from your first submission. I hope you can write more chapters or even come up with more stories in this section. I can't wait for your next masterwork.
Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to read more chapters!
Nothing more to say. Well written, interesting and sexy.
This was my first submission, so I'm glad people seem to like it. I have an idea of what to do for a follow-up, so depending on how much people seem to want it I'll make some time when I can and get it sorted.
I really liked it. I hope you come up with more chapters sooner than later.