All Comments on 'Jessica's Naked Mother Ch. 02'

please get chapter three out quickly

Almost too good. Getting anxcious for the action. ;)

One thing though. You had Jessica lock the door when she went into her room, but Candice opens it anyway at the end. might want to fix that.

Looking forward to the next bit

You need to post more thn 1 chapter at a time. Rhis is too hot!

Getting better and better.

One and only critisisim, you only write 1 page each time and take a while to write another chapter so far and the part ends before I reach orgasm, I mean this is a gorgous story, truely yummy and I need just a bit longer to get off

Please chapter 3 soon

Please add more to this soon

Keep it going at the pace you are taking it. No need to rush.

Excellent read!

I look forward to hearing more...such good build up.Where's part 3?lol

keep going, this is a good story, would be a shame if it was never finished.

Please write more and soon :)

Author gone AWOL? It would really be a shame to leave this one unfinished...

Love the story please write more it would be a shame if you didn't write anymore.

Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

When I first had the same thing basically happen with me, it opened up a flood gate of orgasms that my mom and I shared for at least twenty years. My mom loved to masturbate in front of me and I gave her a show whenever she wanted it. Our tongues helped each other for a long time. Sally G.

Jeez I wish it would indicate if a story is complete or not. I feel like I wasted part of my life reading this. Its obvious it wont get finished Q_Q

I hope their is more to this to come. I love the build up. It's refreshing to see a story that builds up to the sex instead of just the usual "We're here, let's fuck" You know it's going to happen, but the anticipation makes it better.

A shame that a story that is actually *good* ends up dying, while similar crappy stories with no tension or buildup, only smut, manage to keep going forever. Why don't the good one keep writing?

You can't write two chapters of a story and then never continue the story! There is enough positive feedback to merit the story to go on with more chapters. We're waiting.

excellent!!

This has the potential of being a great read, it building up nicely it just needs finishing.

Hope there isn't too long before more chapters are added.

I hope this is not the end please continue the story

I love this story. Please write a third part!

Hello, very nice build up to the story like many of my fellow commenters have mentioned. The story has great potential. If you happen to read this comment I really hope you are okay and continue writing. Would love to know how it ends. :)

- LateNightReads_19

A terrible shame she didn't write more. Excellent grammar. Really well written and erotic.