All Comments on 'Jeurridam Ch. 12: The Hoover Dam'

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aclassyladyaclassyladyalmost 9 years ago
didn't see that coming

The story has gotten better and better as the chapters go. I always look for the next chapter to come and see what happens next. The characters a awesome and I will say this yet again, Keep going!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

The rape was unnecessary - adds nothing to the story, which means it should have been left out.

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