All Comments on 'Jewel Ascending Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am really getting into this story. You managed to cover everything from the broadest strokes all the way down to the minutiae and kept it all interesting because it either is or could be relevant. I look forward to the shrink getting caught since there must be something illegal there since the Counts death. I personally would go after that frumpy laser hair removal bitch for calling the police on her but I am a vindictive prick. I anxiously await your next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I would like to see that she gets forced sexually abused by men

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wonder if she gets a srs operation

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A readable tale, with reasonably adequate editing, but very little salacious value.

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbuse8 months ago

nothing but pronouns politics.

what about fun?

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