All Comments on 'Jills Day Out'

I loved it but could have done without the midget whipping her.

You are a hell of a writer and I would like to see more from you.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read.

Why isn't she famous?

I loved everything about this story.

What was wrong with the midget scene?

I can't believe this story isn't being published commercially.

It has got to be the best erotic story since "O".

This is so hot!

it is outrageous that this author has not been recognised as the dirtiest writer ever!

she publishes online under various but similar sounding pen-names.

this particular story has updated on other sites and is even more imaginative than this.

some of her work will make you glad you arent a woman.