All Comments on 'Jill's Decision Ch. 01: Introduction'
by EroSteve
- 10 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoNo matter what you write or how you write, someone will disparage your work. Keep doing what you're doing - this is a fascinating take and an excellent beginning. I did find the back and forth a little disorienting but that's a minor critique.
Nice job, thanks for your work.
Anonymousover 5 years agoPersonally I thought it was really good and also hope we don’t wait too long for another
SithLord6969over 5 years agoMost multi-part stories don't get this hot this fast, great job! I'm guessing we should all know why this is in the insect category [I won't spoil it for the others], but several questions come to mind... Jill has cheated before, is this something she does or does she and hubby have an arrangement? If not, how will he respond to her cheating? Also, did the 3-some with the babysister result in one of her children? There are so many avenues this story could go down I 'm looking forward to part 2 and beyond!
dirtyoldbimanover 2 years agolove the wanking of scott in the bathroom. the flashback part was a little confusing as to who's boy friend was being ridden, Sheila's ?
