All Comments on 'Jill's First Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
re read it

She is thinking back to how it was when she was just starting her sexual experiences. I think you owe the author an apology.

SatisfierSatisfierover 19 years ago
Vivid descriptions

This story featured some great, vivid descriptions, especially of swollen vulvas. Other authors could learn from these descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good and slow

Good and slow, nice pace. A woman who doesn't involve herself with her lovers is hard to find here.

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