All Comments on 'Jill's Secret Ch. 02'

awesome/.......loved it.....soooo jealous of him...:))

Awesome, loved it. I liked the sudden change towards the end. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Is it Jill or Denise ?

Remembering he had both pride and self respect he told her to never speak to him again. He warned her of the penalties involved if she bothered him again in the future. He realized her only feelings for him were disgust. That she was simply demeaning, degrading and humiliating him for her own selfish desires. That she treated him like a piece of meat. No, when he looked at her, he saw her for the psychotic bitch she was. He never saw her again. The end to a poorly thought out tale of abuse. The characters were so detestable that who cared what they did? It simply wasn't interesting or entertaining. No stars.

Loved this. Was really looking forward to this while at the same time not sure if you'd continue with another chapter or not, and I was definitely NOT disappointed. Aside from the name mix-up I have nothing to complain about, other than perhaps that you could maybe do a little better with the various descriptions (sometimes it feels like: "then she did this..." "then he did that..." etc etc, if you know what I mean?).

Ignore the idiot anon before me who probably downvoted it and gave it 1 star even though he said "no stars" - thus giving it the below-4.5 rating it's at now because of one idiot. 5 stars from me easy and hope that ups the score a bit towards what it really deserves.

I was kinda worried there you'd make him a hermaphrodite like Jill after she came in him, and I'm glad I was wrong there. I love this situation much better. Oh, and by the way - I hope that you mistakenly called her 'Denise' because you're working on another story. I'd love to see more of your work. I hope you didn't mix-up the name because of a future chapter in this series where a 'Denise' comes into play though - as I said, I love this situation much better just as it is now.

so jealous. wish a Domme like Denise would take and claim me as her bitch. a nfoot long dick and dominate, perfection. hope her cum has effects that change him physically and mentally making a perfect submissive um nd dick addicted slut. ( as i need to be)

I, too, am confused - are we reading about Jill, as in Jill's Secret, or Denise?

hey all sorry for the mix up. I meant to change her name before I submitted the story and forgot. as soon as i get a chance I'll fix it.

Is there going to be more writings of your sexcapades now that two are room mates? This was a a very exciting reading.

I liked how she got more rough with him during the second round, and the name calling was nice too. I hope to see a third chapter soon.

The are plenty of futa/m stories where the male turns submissive. It's unfortunate that this story turned into one of those.

Really getting tired of this shit. Advise; look at the romance and vanilla genres, should help. I can't rant today, i don't have the effort.

they're not married (yet) so he should be her bottom bitch for her girlfriends... maybe

When did Jill become Denise????

Jill is the girl he started out with but now she is Denise?

The part when she rough fucked him was very unexpected , I liked the switch between romantic slow fuck to dominate rough fuck , the dialogues , thrash talking were great especially when she made him submit and admitted of her overpowered him. please rewrite Ch.03 to be matched with story characters that we love.

Good story except for one minor detail, you for got the Shemale characters name was Jill, then ended by referring to her as Denise

Great story, just remember her name is Jill not Denise

This was an awesome chapter. I’ve had anal sex with men transgendered girls and got pegged by my bosses granddaughter. I managed to handle all of the till I met Summer a black transgendered girl. I knew her almost 5 years and told her after a few months I wanted her to take me anally. She told me she only had sex with well hung guys. (She’s a bottom) she would come over once a week for dinner and a movie. We would talk during dinner and after the movie. Then she would catch the last bus at 12:45 am to go home. Then about 7 months ago she just disappeared. I called her no answer then after a month her phone was shut off. 3 months later one night about 12:30 am I hear a knock at my door. It was Summer. She was homeless and hungry. It was close to the end of the month and I only had a few things. I fixed her a can of chili she was still hungry so I fixed her another can. We were sitting on the couch talking and she looked at me with a strange look on her face and said to me “You want to touch it?” Took me a few seconds before I could say YES! She untied the string holding up her sweatpants and she pulled them off. My jaw dropped, she was already hard and she was HUGE! She’s at least 9-10 inches and as thick as my wrist. I wanted her in me but she was to big. So I started to suck her off. I could only get half of her cock in my mouth. So for the next 45 minutes I sucked her. She never came. I had to give up my jaw hurt. I gave her my bed and I slept in my recliner. Next morning I tried for an hour to suck her off and still no cum. Tried 4 more time over the next 5 days. Still no cum. 😩