All Comments on 'Jim and I are Vacation Sluts Pt. 03'

I won't comment on whether your stories are erotic enough, that's left to each individual to decide for themselves. HOWEVER, it is weaksauce if you can't take a few minutes to correct spelling and basic grammar. For example, do you not know the difference between "your" and "you're"? Honest to god, put some effort into your writing.