by ScottWood
Not real big on the blatant public sex for everyone to see but it definitely makes me wonder how different my life would have turned out had I been given a girl on my 18th birthday instead of being almost 29 and still never having had a girlfriend or sex.
I love the casual exhibitionism and submission of the women. Can't wait to read more. Really hot world you're building.
to enjoy the written porn of a 'hard-drinking, whore-hopping degenerate' when they write quite well, create interesting characters, can spell and know how to paragraph and punctuate for pacing and tension. Any time you're ready to write -- I'm ready to read. Well done...take care -- hcl
Unfortunately it was not my idea for the story to be in BDSM, its where it got put :(
What a disgusting, male chauvinist fantasy! I loved it.
It perhaps belongs in fetish rather than BDSM unless you have a coming twist. I just think a lot of readers may shy away from BDSM, I usually do.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more of Jim's world.