All Comments on 'Jim's Dilemma Pt. 01'

You left it hanging in the air where the rest and it needs to be a btb ending

Nice start.

Ed

First story!

3

Yeah, sure.

I'll hold off rating until I read part 2. I hope Jim plans for next weekend and deals with Marcus appropriately and burns the bitch too.

I hope Jim will leave this woman but I doubt it.

Way to weak inlace of detail or drama. Typical outline of man comes home to cheating wife. And you leave it as he has a decision to make? Again, with no detail how would we know if he is the type to go nuclear, just walk away, or be happy to share? At his point with no drama or detail we really don't care.

Hey, a fetish is a fetish. You do you… but you really should brush up on the mechanics. Grammar and formatting.

Man don't turn this man into some gay chick that enjoys this crap man let a man be a man for once. Maybe he can't physically fight back but he can figure something out

Very short but straight to the point. BTB and Marcus

Add tag for bull.

Cuckolds should love it. I don't. But to each his own. I find it disturbing and disgusting, but then I am not the target reader.

Why's it always gotta be a big black guy?

Can't the guy be Hispanic, or Swedish, or a tall Chinese guy that has a big dick and knows martial arts?

Do you authors just not know any black dudes. So they're like a mystery or fear?

There's cliche, then there's complete lack of original thought.

This story is told 8000 times already on this very site.

One can only hope that Jim will get some revenge and retain self-respect in the process. Janet can be collateral damages. Until that - 1/5

Unfinished

Your story line is strong, however you are in need of an editor.

I will be intrested to see where you go with this yarn as there are many possibilities.

I will ad you to my favourites and oversee your progress, good luck.

cheers John C.

Apart from the ridiculous dialogue, terrible grammar and unbelievable plot, it was mercifully short. I stopped counting at 6-felonies, and the conclusion was MC had a lot of thinking to do? 2/5.

Nice introduction!

Let's have the rest, soon, please.

I would give you a 1, but those are wasted, so I gave you a 2.

If he has to think about it, that's an answer in itself.