All Comments on 'Joanie and Me'

Fantastic build up. You write well and I am eager for more soon please.

Good beginning!

5

Sneaky you old fart! You didn't indicate this was a multi chapter story so I was waiting for the punchline and them getting together and along comes, "Part two is finished and being edited."!!! For that I hope there is a part 3 and maybe more!

Great story you really do well with stories centered around the Crafts. Hard working blue collar everyday folks. Love this couple and we all know where it's going but It's going to be fun having you lead us there. You never disappoint or fail to entertain us your fans.

Take care, Boss, stay healthy, stay happy and keep writing. You bring a lot of enjoyment to your fans! Looking forward to reading "Part two"!

Cheers

SAGE

Looks very promising. Waiting, impatiently.

Lovely build in a nice feel good story.

I was hoping for a little more action. After all, 12K plus words and no action. I already see this turning into a happily ending story, with perhaps brother and older sister turning into a real family with kids and all the complications that come with them being brother and sister. Just a guess. Well get proofreader in gear and get chapter #2 out so us incest reading freaks can dream on. A reader in Florida

Great beginning, I love the build up and sexual tension. I thought this was going to wrap up in one reading but I'm glad there is more coming.

"Part two is finished"

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No chapter number earns a rating of 1.

OH! You tease!

This is what a good sib love story should be. I don't mind the slow build at all and the more detail the better. It allows you to get emersed into the character(s) and their lives. I am looking forward to part two. Thanks so much. I am enjoying this so far.

I didn't read the story, but i like your name. r410a. I perfer r123. But my favorite is r11.

Loving the story. AAAAA++++

Great buildup! You made me want to keep reading. Can't wait for another chapter!

Nicely done. The front story was great and after finding his sister, it only got better. Guess I'm just an old softy because several times I found that something had gotten into my eyes, lol. Looking forward to the next part of the story. I should give this only four stars just because Joanie didn't like "granny panties" but will go with a five because it's a good story and they didn't buy a bunch of thongs, lol again.

A great start, I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

An excellent start. A slow-burn, with enough backstory to realistically cover any budding relationship. Looking forward to more.

Excellent...looking forward to finish.

If part 2 is already done why didn't you just submit it in one submission? This is just 1/2 a story, with out much emotion from the characters at all....

Great story . Pulled me right in from the beginning. Can't wait for part 2