All Comments on 'Joanne in Sand'

Romance was sterile at best

What a nice, pleasant little tale

Well written, as always. Such a lovely romance.

Marvelous story!

5

A nicely told romance story. However, there were a small number of typos, but the biggest was Jo saying her life had changed dramatically and taken a 360 degree turn. That’s a full circle, meaning she was in the same place. She should have said she took a 180 degree turn — so going in the opposite direction.

I must have missed it ... went back over the beginning but couldn't find where she first met Tim ... he just appeared? Enjoyed the story !

When they meet, she calls him Tim before he's introduced himself. Those few lines read awkwardly, as if you made some changes but didn't fully check what you had done. Overall nice read though.

Nice story. I liked that. Last couple of sentences were excellent, I wished I had thought of that. I did get a little nervous, no, make that very nervous with the guy in the bar who brought Jo the blue drink. My mind went to a dark place, glad it worked out differently. Whew! I appreciate the shout out at the end, glad you were sandspired to write to the subject. Fun. 5*