All Comments on 'Jodie Ch. 01'

great Story

hope its going on

Please end it there.

NO NO NO. Listen you sperm breath, I do not care if you in to this, but placing this story in the wrong category, makes you an asshole. That is why we have CATEGORIES you little prick. We, the readers, have a choice of the topics, but to mislead is not cool. Please be nice and don't do it again.....Promise????

There are way too many typos in this piece. Very frustrating to read.

Nothing about her seems likable and that guy just seems desperate for wanting to be with her. Ew.

to get off from a rotten cooch like Jodie. For god's sake, where's your dignity man?

I kinda liked the story, don't let those people who join just so they can preach to us win! If you don't continue the story on here let me know WHERE (other site) you do continue at, if you want I know a few other places you can post. (look up Amy Montana)

Don´t listen to the haters ! I would love to be put in a situation like this.

Keep on writing !!!!

I couldn't read this story....there were too many unnecessary words added in places there shouldn't have been..i'm guessing the characters are from England by how they talk but i can't do it...

and by the way some of these comments looked its a good thing i stopped after the first paragraph

It's going to be hard to avoid having her continue her evil ways and have him marry her to live a life of humiliation and servitude. If you can think of a way to give the story a twist continue. Maybe the bitch might experience a black lover who abuses her similarly to the way she does the main character causing her to change her ways. Maybe he lets her get used to his submission and then meets a black woman who takes him from the bitch. Or maybe you let him grow a pair and make the white bitch learn to taste the ass off of his dick from a good white or black woman.

I loved it, nothing like a white slut treating a white man like he is a worthless, based solely on the fact of his skin colour and cock.

Hoping desperately that more parts are comming up.

Of course I do!

So please ignore the assholes--and arseholes--who have nothing better to do than criticize your writing ability and your choice of subject matter.

You write damn well and the subject matter appeals to me.

So please,lets hear more about Jodie and her friends.

Great story. Look forward to Ch 2