All Comments on 'Joe Ch. 01'

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aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago

Please continue for it is getting interesting now. Good start to a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Serves him right

Awesome turn of events

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
the bastard

I don't see how joe could have sex with some one else so soon after a breakup with some one he has so much feelings for.? I mean ten minutes ago he couldn't even enjoy a kiss with david. why does the cheater still have a key ?.

sm1982sm1982about 8 years ago
Nice start!

I don't know how thoroughly Anon with all the questions read this chapter but in the part featuring Olivia, she reminded him of finding him with all the liquor and condoma, so having sex with someone else so soon after a break up is not new to him. I would have liked to have learned more about Jonah and why he has guys send him pics/videos but he gives them his old address. As for why Kyle still has a key, he didn't say goodbye to Joe and came back to do so and/or he realized he still had a key and was returning it. I actually thought it was going to be Olivia at the bedroom door, not Kyle so that was a nice surprise. Can't wait to read more (:

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