All Comments on 'Joe's Beach House Ch. 01'

by joehard_007

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ny_lover almost 11 years ago

Love the writing and flow

Great start to a hot summer! I think you've painted a plausible scenario that I hope you will continue.

masterslave00 almost 11 years ago

Waiting for next installment

Waiting for next instalment...

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

A nice beginning...

Moves along at a nice, slow pace.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Losing interest so gosh darn wordy

This story so far could be 3 or 4 good paragraphs but you turned into two pages - but taking so long to say it. Good descriptions but hard for reader to stay focus waiting for author to "get on with it!"

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I've been writing stories for a few years now, and I really appreciate the kind comments and ratings you have given them! I suppose they are all reflective of my passion for nudity in semi-public spaces like the woods, or a beach. Guess it's just the exhibitionist in me! I ...

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