All Comments on 'Johanna x Sharon (F/F) Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loving this story, and hope you continue. As for translation you are doing very well as English is probably one of the hardest languages to master. The only thing I will point out for the sake of gender him refers to male so it should be her (female,) and he again is male where as, she is female term.

Any thanks for the story and look forward to the next chapters.

Stay safe. Rgds Al

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