All Comments on 'John and Melissa Ch. 03'

For Next Submission!

I've been reading from this site for along time and this was about one of the best I've read. Your work will only get better with time. I look forward to your next submission. Your capturing the point of view for each character was very careful and believable. I had to read this chapter to cum after reading chapter 2, I got so hot.

You write extremely well. You appear to be a beginner only because most authors would use one post with several pages rather than 3 posts.

If you post frequently you will soon be a highly favored author on this site.

Please continue the story.

That was a great series... and my Throbbing Cock is proof of that! now excuse me as I read it again, so I can relieve him!!!

Looking fwd to more!!!

oh goodness tht was a total turn on tht is soo sexy you are a amazing writer

So nice to see them cumming at each other's loving touches. I enjoyed some much needed stroking while reading this arousing chapter. Their mouths are wonderful ways to pleasure each other. I wish someone would take my fucking dickmeat in their mouth and give me a good blowjob, because I'm so turned on and horny from your great story, Misty. Keep writing, I thoroughly love reading your stories. I think some is from your personal experiences, which is why it seems so real and wonderful, honey. I just want to read all that you share through your writings. I know I'm a perverted guy, but I love getting aroused by your stories. Keep them cumming and cumming and cumming, please. IF you'd like to hear some of my sexual experiences, just email me and I'll be happy to share too.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

PS - I've had a variety of encounters. Let me know your desires and I'll try to meet them!!