All Comments on 'John the Captive'

I kinda liked it. Nothing great, but not bad.

I liked it but I just think you should give more detail to the first encounter. Still a good story though.

This almost sounds true. I didnt like this at all.

Excellent story... I want it to be real... I would really get off on knowing it was true, and in being able to discuss it with the dom, even visit with him to watch.

when the next one comin out? Will he ever be rescue?

I love this story and want moooore!

lucky John. amazing. 5/5

I just found this story. This is my favorite story I've ever read. And I have read 100s. U should keep writing. So hot. Excellent job. .

From your biggest fan

-korra-

This is a great start! I need more.

I so wish this would happen to me..... Let me a message at Brenda_sub17331@yahoo.com

Have always dreamed of being caught and turned into a sex pet! Bring on the Tops!

I'm curious to see where this story goes and how, so I wouldn't mind another chapter

I love the premise where a gay guy is infatuated with a str8 guy. He kidnaps him to turn him into his unwilling lover over long term captivity. You captured that vibe beautifully. I would have liked more detail around the early encounter when the str8 guy realizes it's about not only sex, but gay sex.

Why doesn't John try to escape? It's too bad there is no sequel.

OK you kidnap an innocent guy, hold him captive in a naked state, leave him in solitude for days until you want to have sex by force. Can someone say a sick, delusional lonely nut? Why not look for someone on-line to date or go to a gay club and have consensual sex? Considering this is gay erotica, even if John escapes, or Sebastian releases him, I bet eventually John will return for sex on a consensual basis. He probably developed a desire for kinky sex with men despite his anger at being kidnapped and raped.

Loved it. Though I wish there was more to it instead of just skimming over the story. First good story on here where the straight guy actually hated the sex!!

hot fantasy !! To have an asshole, willing or not, available to fuck ANYTIME you wish.

Made my asshole quiver. Yummm!!