All Comments on 'John's Domination Ch. 01'

This is how we all started out,, looking forward to seeing what else happens.

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Hope to see additional chapters. Numerous punctuation mistakes.

Hope to see a few more chapters real soon...

This is an intriguing start please write more

That's all you need to know. Throw the manipulative bitch out and get on with your life. This type of fantasy crap leads to nothing but trouble.

I am hoping there is more. It is an Interesting start and I am curious where you will take this. I am betting you have ideas for the first few chapters and then...... Or do you have an end goal in mind?

I would like to know more about what John is feeling or thinking about all of this. Is it enough? is it frustrating because it is not enough? Is he more turned on thinking about the cum eating later, after the fact? Eating your own cum after an orgasm can be a difficult task but it seemed rather easy for John. Was it?

"Well...I mean...it's just something to lookout" I think you meant "look at" here.

I am also curious about what other stories you read here. I checked your favorites and found none. :-(