All Comments on 'JOI'

by NeonRabbit

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Anthony1965Anthony1965almost 2 years ago

I loved this story. Looking forward to reading more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

this needs a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Personally I was hoping that the video that transformed Jake was put out there by Tabby. She could create Jill while getting Mitch back. Mitch gets the opportunity to get sucked and fucked by 2 girls without having to worry about pissing Tabby off. And unemployment doesn't bother Jill at all. Her focus has shifted to other things.

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Neo Pulp writer and low budget sorcerer. I try to write a lot of my stories as though they would be at home in Heavy Metal magazine. Beyond that I just like playing with the medium whether sci fi, horror, action/adventure, romance, or a combination of genres I always try to ...