All Comments on 'Joined at the Hip'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

GOOD STORY. IT SOUNDS GOOD TO ME TO CONTINUE. SO, GOOD LUCK

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

please sort out the typos,they distract from a very good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Include the sister in a sequel!

JessiWa36JessiWa36over 1 year ago

I like it, definitely continue please.

ShirleyWantonShirleyWantonover 1 year ago

I really want to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree with the other commenter. Chapter 2 is in order. Like what happens when his sister comes home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent and different. A fantasy really as this cannot happen in this natural world of ours. But a good and stimulating fantasy anyway. What can you add to it without clouding and spoiling it ?.

PH4R40HPH4R40Hover 1 year ago

Excited for you to continue this. Wonder what the rest of the family dynamic will be like. Getting the sister involved? Fucking them under the nose of the brother? Please keeping going

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. It’ll be interesting to see how his sister reacts when he starts rubbing himself under the table during Thanksgiving dinner and their mother starts moaning and diddling herself. Maybe sis might like some of that big dick too. Just a thought, and the author did say he was thinking about making this into a series. Hope so. 5 st⭐️rs.

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazedover 1 year ago

There has to be a way to get his sister involved. If and how you do that, I'll leave up to you.

bearboy1492bearboy1492over 1 year ago

Could be fun to see an anthology with other sons given different powers to seduce their mothers. Maybe the gypsy girl goes around and looks for son that want their mother

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very good story keeps it UP.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

good story but there were a few misspelled words that took me a second to think about for the meaning... but the misused or wrong spelling did not take away from the writing.... i could have done without the eating his own cum out of the gypsy girl..... i almost stopped reading at that point thought it was going to be a gay story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

God the was an amazing story I hope you continue and maybe bring his sister into the mix maybe with a little help from the gypsy woman till its a three way sex feast and mother and daughter get pregnant and the gypsy woman joins the in their sexual romping gave it 5 stars!!1 please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Awesome waiting on more? 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved the story. I have it 5 stars. Can you continue with mommy and possibly sister. Mommy in pantyhose and sister in stockings.

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Dominant younger Man with a preference for rough play and older women. I also have a very creative mind and love to try new and exciting things. I write about things I have experienced and things very personal to me. I tend to focus more on the emotional side of sexual inte...