by patricia51
Welcome back P51. A good story to herald your brief return. Hope to see another in time
Scores 4/5
It has been too long since you posted a story for us. Very glad to see you back. Even a knuckle drager like me can appreciate your stories. I know that life at times can get in the way, hope you write more soon.
I'm not even a fan of NCIS, but I enjoyed this thoroughly. The style reminds me of the detective novel style of the '50s and '60s, and makes for enjoyable reading. And the description of the sex is illustrative and VERY erotic. What a story!!
Good story writers like you are worth their weight in gold.
Please stay and share some more.
Jedd Clampett
A five for you Patricia
Literotica needs more writers of your caliber! Another great story from one of the masters. This brings back some great memories.
I really do hope there will be more?
Even if for only one story. I enjoyed it. It is interesting to read a story where you already know the characters and can see them in your head, although picturing Gibbs nude will make it harder for me to watch NCIS in the future.
Always have been a fan of your stories. It's good to have you back, even if it was temporary.
Oh yes, so nice to read another Pat51 story. I usually don't read Celeb stories but then it was from you and, about NCIS, two of my favorites, I was ecstatic. Thank you so much, 5 Stars! Hope you have more stories for us, your to young and talented to retire. Love & Semper Fi from an old Jarhead!
Always a great day when we get a new story from one of the best. Can't thank you enough for this wonderful fun piece, hope you will honor us again soon.
Delighted you wrote a new story. You haven't lost your touch.
Boyd Percy
this one had to be #1. TK U MLJ LV NV
"Patricia Felton, whom Gibbs remembered as a Coast Guard Petty Officer from their investigation into the San Dominick," - I didn't mind this reference back to what I presume was another story, as it had no relevance to this story, but this, "How good this feels. How much I miss it. It doesn't happen very often. Not since..." makes me wonder, "not since WHAT?"
Patti is still the best there is at what she does! Great story.
I want to be Patricia when I grow up. I have been an admirer since I started reading ten years ago. What a charge to see a new Patricia51 story in print!! Thank you so much, and I hope to see more. Very grateful, Randi
I was not a member of literotica when you were an active author. I have enjoyed many of your stories. I never thought I would get to read a new one. I loved your story and it proves no matter how long you may take off a good author will always be a good author. Thank you for another excellent story. 5*s.
ADE12