All Comments on 'Jon's Old Granny'

by goodyearman

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jtocsmartalecjtocsmartalecalmost 3 years ago

I think what you meant is that she wasn't really his grandmother and they were roleplaying... That is why he paid her up front and the next person to enter the house was the next John, yes?

goodyearmangoodyearmanalmost 6 years agoAuthor
The twist at he end.

You have to read and consider the last sentence to really get the meaning behind the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
2nd chapter?

Please continue this and let us know who came in after Jon left to lick granny's holes clean.

radioman2radioman2almost 6 years ago
Grandmom nurtures best

Engaging story with a nice ending.

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