All Comments on 'Jordan's Lesbian Metamorphosis'

If this is indeed a first attempt then congratulations, it is a very good effort . the build up is a touch slow but does not ruin the pace and i would be dissapointed if i didnt see it continued.

great first story. keep up the good work

Excellent first effort! And god, you gotta do a follow up! Bring Debbie into it as well! That was hot and extremely sexy... i need a cool shower! xxx

Great first story; bet your are hot!

Keep writing

Cannot figure out if your are "drawing" on your "wished for" experience as student or teacher.

Bi babylez, would love you as a student; oh yes.........

sexy story, very erotic

I love it so write more I promise to read

Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I can visualize all of these characters perfectly. Very descriptive and vivid writing. Can't wait until they all get together.

You hear the music. Keep writing!

Please do continue very nice hot(!!) start.I hope the m(!!) in your title begins rather soon.

Impressive first effort! Please keep at it!

You definitely know what erotic writing is about. Nice tension and release, fun characters.

this is one of the hottest stories I have read here.

Holy shit that was fucking good! If you don't continue this, I will be disappointed!

THAT WAS SO HOT. KEEP THEM COMING

...but one helluva bang. Keep it going.

That was great..keep it going.

I'm looking foward to the next chapter! And please include Debbie in whatever happens! ;)

A really wonderful story , and so very hot and sexey. Loved it loads and enjoyed it v much. Only disappointing thing was it came to an end... still looking forward to next one.

Well written. Good build-up. Great description. Hoping you will write a second chapter to this.

that story was totaly hot the way you describe things is amazing.please please continue

Excellent story, you have a lot of great potential as a writer. Take your time and please do continue.

Wow. You're a fucking awesome writer.

The story was great and just kept me coming back for more. You have GOT to continue the story!

...holy crap.

Science teacher? I suggest that you teach writing. Teaching science and math are easy compared with writing. If you could teach students to write as well as you, you would make a significant contribution to those you teach.

Wow! That was the hottest story i've read so far on this site (and I've read quite a few). It was especially meaningful for me because I'm a teacher myself and lust after teenaged girls every day. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Will in MD

Ooohh, you're good. Those two women terrorize me. I like the other teacher because she is a real beauty and Jordan can really make love to her, but these two are out of her stratosphere. They will make her look so bad that she can't continue to work there. They have proved that aready.I loved "Bobby's Mom", and I look forward to this series of stories about Jordan but these two girls are almost unbelievable. I can't wait to see how you maneuver them into something that is good and useful for Jordan. One of your "Adorable" friends. Hector.P.S. My regards to the love of your life, Kelly. -- OK! OK! I'll stay out of your personal life........God, you are so damn fascinating, how am I going to do that?

Just Awesome!!

Your writing is very descriptive. I love how you show us everything and how you let us use our imagination with your writing. This story is just incredible

Thanks for sharing it with us

It took a bit long to get through all the background material on Jordan, but now I am fully drawn into this erotic fantasy and look forward to the next chapter. Love the way Stacey introduced Lisa and Erika and then tantalized us just enough at the end to want to see what happens next with Jordan.

wow, this story is amazing. It makes me want everything you've wrote to happen to me.

It took so much effort to read through to the end before touching myself.

As you know, there really is a Memorial High School in a district near Houston.

You have one lovely, erotic mind and I like what you write. Keep it up!

very sexy fantasy lesbianism.

Oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Life doesn't get hotter than this story!

If i am drooling, can only imagine what Jordan must be feeling ** HOT HOT HOT ** With four hotties oozing raw sexuality, i can only surmise that this is going to be one erotic journey for Jordan.............. and me! LOL...... LOVE IT!

And I miss your writing. What a wonderful author you were. I just wish you had been able to write more stories for us, and still be here.

BabyLez’s “Jordan’s Lesbian Metamorphosis” is an amazingly written story of a young woman’s search for her sexual identity.

Jordan Peters is a new teacher at her old high school teaching Science. Jordan is re-united with Mrs. Blake, her high school Science Teacher. What happens to Jordan the first day of school is nothing like her College Professors taught her that teaching was all about.

This story is a love story about a young teacher finding her sexuality and an older teacher dealing with her loss so many years previous that affects her current relationships.

Poor Jordan, we suffer for her. I m on her side

Smoking hot, and well developed x

I may able to transform myself into Jordans place and so Erika, ancestry iceland, this must be a extraordinary enchanting earthshaking being ..... So becoming transfixed or one single minded or puppy like is all quite clear BUT as this is an American high school what happen IF??? You all you my intension if this will become public? ...... Jordan never ever again will be teaching in the US, so the danger in this is not even scribled down with my ne word or thought ...... But all in all lovely first chapter

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Such a good story!

Wow, I am a guy and these gals just rocked my world! Can't wait to share this with my girlfriend. She has been hinting she would like to experiment with a strong younger woman!!!