All Comments on 'Jo's American Tale'

A very sensuous story, well developed. However, about 2/3 through the first page she is making out with Matt, but "Mark" is mentioned - this appears to be a momentary slip.

You've managed to out-do yourself!...I loved your descriptions in this story, and am wondering about the possibility of another chapter.

Jennifer

Very steamy story hun, I enjoyed it from beginning to end!

That was great, lots of action and the characters seemed real too...fantastic stuff, but then, the stories always are when they're written by you!

Nuff said!

Just remember, we Brits say 'arse' not 'ass'!

A brilliant story Hocky9377, off to read more of your stories. I like your style of writing.

Well done sweetie and very hot!!!