All Comments on 'Josh’s Escort Chronicles, Ch. 01'

Nice story. Almost wholesome.

next one , linger longer on your water fantasies description for your readers ' pleasure ...

Actually really hot, believable, and relatable. He's excited and nervous and she's trying to put him at ease. I know that most girls in that profession don't have a problem with peeing on their dates, giving not recieving. It's cute how he's so nervous about bringing up his fetish when it's not that unusual for her, and she's trying to be reassuring, casual, and flirty about it.

Totally agree with him wanting her to pee on him not necessarily being a dom/sub thing but an intimacy/trust thing. Afterall he's asking her to relieve herself in front of him and be showered with her warm bodily fluids filtered through her body and shot through her pink flower which comes to life as a fountain of her bodily water.

If you do a continuation maybe have Josh put more foresight into preparing for his watersports fetish now that he knows she is cool with it. Like planning a longer party, getting a hotel room with a jacuzzi tub, contacting her to drink a lot of water in advance, having her bring a lot of water, maybe even asking her to bring a friend. Hopefully, the next time he will be bold enough to ask her to give him a golden shower in his face and mouth, it should not taste bad from a healthy and hydrated woman. Like warm water.

Definately hope to see more developement of these characters and developements with these characters.

Actually really hot, believable, and relatable. He's excited and nervous and she's trying to put him at ease. I know that most girls in that profession don't have a problem with peeing on their dates, giving not recieving. It's cute how he's so nervous about bringing up his fetish when it's not that unusual for her, and she's trying to be reassuring, casual, and flirty about it.

Totally agree with him wanting her to pee on him not necessarily being a dom/sub thing but an intimacy/trust thing. Afterall he's asking her to relieve herself in front of him and be showered with her warm bodily fluids filtered through her body and shot through her pink flower which comes to life as a fountain of her bodily water.

If you do a continuation maybe have Josh put more foresight into preparing for his watersports fetish now that he knows she is cool with it. Like planning a longer party, getting a hotel room with a jacuzzi tub, contacting her to drink a lot of water in advance, having her bring a lot of water, maybe even asking her to bring a friend. Hopefully, the next time he will be bold enough to ask her to give him a golden shower in his face and mouth, it should not taste bad from a healthy and hydrated woman. Like warm water.

Definately hope to see more developement of these characters and developements with these characters.

Actually really hot, believable, and relatable. He's excited and nervous and she's trying to put him at ease. I know that most girls in that profession don't have a problem with peeing on their dates, giving not recieving. It's cute how he's so nervous about bringing up his fetish when it's not that unusual for her, and she's trying to be reassuring, casual, and flirty about it.

Totally agree with him wanting her to pee on him not necessarily being a dom/sub thing but an intimacy/trust thing. Afterall he's asking her to relieve herself in front of him and be showered with her warm bodily fluids filtered through her body and shot through her pink flower which comes to life as a fountain of her bodily water.

If you do a continuation maybe have Josh put more foresight into preparing for his watersports fetish now that he knows she is cool with it. Like planning a longer party, getting a hotel room with a jacuzzi tub, contacting her to drink a lot of water in advance, having her bring a lot of water, maybe even asking her to bring a friend. Hopefully, the next time he will be bold enough to ask her to give him a golden shower in his face and mouth, it should not taste bad from a healthy and hydrated woman. Like warm water.

Definately hope to see more developement of these characters and developements with these characters.