All Comments on 'Josie's First Date'

I liked this tale of a normal trans girl and a normal guy getting together. Your writing shows promise and is quite good, also kudos to whomever edited it as it was unmarred by the usual typos seen in quite a few of the stories posted on Lit.

Sincerely,

Rikki B

As mentioned above, a very good first effort. My OCD did spot a minor editing issue at one point, but then, we are all amateur writers and volunteer editors. Your pacing was very nice, with just enough tension and the pull-backs were very nice to see.

I look forward to more from you and hope that my first will be nearly as good.

Decent story that was a joy to read.

Liked the story. I think the other commenters are complaining about your use of layed rather than laid.

Hopefully you will continue the tales of Josie or write more similar stories.

Just good clean fun lovemaking just as it supposed to be.