All Comments on 'Journey from Addiction to Love'

They should choose a guy together maybe a bi one?

Congratulations!!!

Nice start:) Keep going!

Great build although you repeated yourself in the beginning. That tends to turn readers away without reading the entire story. Make sure to check grammar, spelling and such before submitting. Let the reader know that this is a Cuckold story right up front or you will find many Annony's will try to discourage you and rip on your story. Tell the readers you would like constructive help and any other will be deleted.

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Oh My Sorry

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TBC

As another commenter suggested, the dual paragraphs caught my attention, but other than that you have a great story started. Please bring more, and use your own mind, (not the thoughts of others), to tell us what comes next. Very erotic, and I will watch for more.

Other than the first ten paragraphs being immediately repeated (editor required?) it was a very good story. It appeared to almost be a narration of events that have actually happened to the author, maybe it is, who know's. The groundwork is laid for what promises to be an exciting story of cuckolding and some hard fucking of a white wife/Milf by a hung BBC. Personally I can't wait! 5* from me.

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Thank you for comments. I appreciate some of paragraphs might be repeated, this is my first ever attempt to do this I am not naturally an author but instead trying to share something as it has helped me to write things down.

As one person has commented my story is not fiction it is my memory of what has happened to me - the story is true and still part of who I am

Bee

Keep going!

Annoyed at large, duplicated section at the beginning -- cut and paste error. Realize you may be too embarrassed to ask for editing assistance, but it would be very helpful.

What a good first story (although a little disappointed at the duplication early on). There is so much potential in the text that I hope you can expand a little more about the direction it should go xxx