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geemeedeegeemeedeeover 2 years ago

Just when I think this story can’t be more compelling, you kick it up another notch! We were warned that David, et al were too naïve, and now we see the possible downfall of Jiyū civilization.They ARE humans, after all. Why Pierce wants to burn it all to the ground will probably prove to be incredibly petty, because human.

I am dumb as hell when it comes to math and science, but can’t they compare Jiyū’s land mass to Earth’s and take where the One City portal dumps out people and math it out to where the Japan people would land on Jiyū?

RickHeathenRickHeathenover 2 years agoAuthor

Just keep reading! No spoilers.

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I served in the military, and I’m currently an author. More of my works can be found under my real name, Rick Haydn Horst, at this link: https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/RickHorst A Note on Star Ratings: I do my best to write great stories with a plot and character dev...