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by Sweetsudha26

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It is obvious English is not your forte. The tense is inconsistent and you are obviously transliterating from Hindi or some other vernacular you are comfortable with.

Get yourself an editor to make your stories more readable.

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