All Comments on 'Joy, Pain, and All Between Ch. 02'

I can't wait for more!

And the bf/wm thing is so hott to me...

This really might be one of my favorite stories so far, for real. I like the attitude she has and that he has just that little touch of arrogance when he knows she's been checkin' him out.

Post more soon!!

This chapter was much better than the last one. I like how you fixed her language and diction. I was annoyed last chapter because you fell into that stereotypical uneducated sounding dialogue when she was talking to Mikael or whatever his name was. yo for you, you for your...I know she knows how to talk properly. She's college educated and maintaining a 3.5. Help a sister out and keep her sounding intelligent. Thanks.

*****

I am enjoying the character development. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Skyler is much more likable now, good job. I actually like seeing the insecurity a little. The foundation for a confrontation with her mother down the line is intriguing, too.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

This chick is hilarious! great job!

I love this story, this is so me and my girl. A real girl no pretense. I love the name for the teacher Satan, sounds like my A & P lab professor.

I'm loving this story

Loving it more and more,,,

Light and refreshing as only college scenarios can be.

Sky's mom is a woman with issues.Thank goodness she sees her mother as the control freak she is and keeps a smart distance. No shame in her game.

While I strongly dislike the word mulatto to describe bi-racial people; it does harken back to the flavor of attitudes people had in days past.

...whether it's perfectly SANE to be offended at some thing a FICTIONAL character says, but DAMN!

that woman is JUST WRONG.

I'd knock some sense into her myself i i wasn't so sure that she'd SHOOT me on sight for being 'MULATTO'.

And, you know, if she were REAL...