All Comments on 'Joy Ride'

Short but very very sweet. And well written.

The story was well paced, taking the reader along on a nicely building experience. It's also a good start on a series. Hopefully Mrs. Lynn will be taking Brad on a few more joyrides. Perhaps she can let him ride her tits, since she has a nice set, and she seems to like the touch and feel of his full size cock. A couple stories in, it would be funny if she took him to a local lovers' lane for a back seat tumble, only to have Kyle pull up next to them while his mom was being fully stretched by Brad's cock in the back of her SUV. Nicely done.

Awesome story. I loved it. Please continue

I love this story. I look forward to seeing when Brad gets into Mrs. Lynn's panties. Hot Story!!!

Good start. Would like to seea couple of more chapters. I'm sure as best friends, Brad will have to get a drunk passed out Kyle safely home one night. I'm sure Mrs. Lynn would be thankful.

I was really wishing she would take him in her muth.

Good job on a tale I haven't seen before.

Enjoyable start and I hope there's more. My one beef is that the mom's name should have been Joy to go with the title.

If this is how the story starts, chapter 2 is going to really heat things up!!

And then what happened?

A really good, short bit. I'd love to see this play out some more.

This could be a good start to a series of events where a young man is helped to discover the joy of sex by a mature woman. It was rather quickly into the action with little explanation about Lynn's motivation, but the action was well described.

I like stories about mature ladies enjoying themselves while helping young gentlemen develop an appropriate technique. Young ladies may then benefit from the young man's training.

Lue

Thanks for sharing.

A very sexy story. The gps element really added to the story, making it far more interesting and enjoyable than the normal milf/young man stories. Another instalment would be great but even as a one off i really enjoyed it x

The NEXT time Mrs. Lyn takes Brad, let the blowjob be the first route, followed by Brad letting Mrs. Lynn feel his exploding cock inside her. Since Brad has darker hair than Kyle, give him the beginnings of chest hair and the hairy crotch that gives off a sexy manly scent!

Hope she helps him de-stress before his spanish test. Perhaps he needs a ride to school that day, and of course Kyle goes with his gf.

hope to read more stories like that it was very good

Trembling blonde hair? Well I've never known hair to tremble fwiw.

Big boy could have caressed her boobs at the light.

Cute story. Hope there's more.

Very playful and fun... enjoyed it..

That was simple, but oh so fun. No need to get full intercourse, that is surely really hot.

Well done!

More more more

I don't know about any other 18 year-old but when I was that age, if some MILF was stroking my cock, there would have been no problem getting it off in the allotted time. I would have been shooting in about 30 seconds. :)

I liked how you added a since of urgency with the GPS. That was the icing on the cake. Definitely wouldn't mind a part 2. :)

Very hot!!

Very hot!!

Really enjoyed the humour in this - the GPS interruptions make the story

Great job! A perfect slice of life like a lewd Norman Rockwell painting with a perfect balance and realistic depiction of the characters. The timing with the GPS is masterful.! 5 stars!

Mrs. Lynn, if you missed a cock like this in High School, you could try adult education

WOW! Wish I could give you more than a 5. Every young man's fantasy come true.

Very entertaining! When you had Bradley's friend and the dad come out of his mom's shop in part 2, I was wondering if you were going to have them double-teaming Bradley's mom while he was fooling around with their mom/wife. Would have been poetic justice. :)

Very good. Got me worked up.

Unbelievable, but a fun romp nonetheless!