All Comments on 'Joy Ride'

The last story by this author was 412 words long, and never got to the story part. The site claims they require stories of 750 words or more.

This story is a girl going away to college, accepted on 'early decision' which puts her at eighteen. She fuckers her 2 years younger brother. Yet, they publish the story of a minor fucking?

Wishing I had a woman like that. Not necessarily a sister but definitely a woman like that. The story is short, sweet, and well done. Hope I can have a ride like that someday. Five stars.

So few brave souls take advantage of it. Mom knows more than she's letting on.

I would have enjoyed this when I was about twelve!

Love your stories!

Fantastic way you covered so many categories.

Excellent Brother and Sister, Hott, Erotic car ride,, Love and affection between siblings.,,Sadness that they will miss each other’s time together..

Hope you offer another chapter when they return home for Thanksgiving,

Excellent erotic story. Love the different categories your cover.

Brother and sister loving each other

Love the sex in the car when Mom is driving

I enjoy your writing.

Awesome story~ Please keep em cumming~

What a great way to pass the time on a road trip.

-And taking your brother bareback while mom drives. It's making me crazy. I can just imagine you walking into the Joyce Kilmer service plaza, your brother's thick, white cum sliding down your thighs.

Pay no attention to the trolls. I've been reading through your work-HOT!!!

Wish you were my sister.

I have read this three times and enjoyed it every time.

How about a college visit by “little brother “?

Please write more to this story! :) It was so good

You painted an epic scene with few words! Please flush this story out!

Very Well written in such few words.

The sleeping sister narrative made my heart jump. I like the way she woke up with her brother's hand between her thighs. Thank you.

Keep writing! And Thank You!

Short n sweet. You did a great job on this one. I can only imagine what naughty shenanigans these two had over the summer.

'62 Citroen rear seat was like an old sofa.

Windows never cleared till next morning.

Not bad, could have used a little more build up, and character development; but not bad for flash fiction.

And "Mom" didn't smell the sex going on in the back seat????

I read this the first time over a year ago and it was FANTASTIC!

It was even BETTER THIS TIME.

Your writing makes me so hard.

Thanks

Some of the best times siblings can have are sexual ones! Thanks

very impressive I liked it alot

An excellent, well composed story.

Even though it started life as a short story of 1000 words or less I think it merits either a continuation or follow on.

Another masterpiece from you. A tad short but extremely enjoyable. Wish I'd had a sister like that growing up. Dad waa military so we travelled via car a lot. Oldest of 3 boys so..........I suffered. 4 stars

DragonRider55

This is a reread of a awesome short story. This was a

FANTASTIC EROTIC ADVENTURE.

Wish you were my sister. I would change schools.

Very, very well done....

Pretty good until I got to the part where you casually mention that they'd been fucking all summer. Too convenient. Doesn't flow well.

Well done for a short story...............():\

Simple story but good. I remember the first time my sister got over me and slipped my hard cock into her wet and hot pussy. She was great. When done she liked me clean.

"Joy Ride:" - The story is not a five-star length quality...but, it is definitely a fabulous four-star rendering, causing a good hard, hard-on. The images of the adolescent brother and sister coupling(s), consummating sexual activities, in my brain's sex-induced images, were great and phenomenal...but disappointingly short-lived.