All Comments on 'Juanita 'n Dito Ch. 22-24'

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 4 years ago
Continuing excellent

Just catching up on recent chapters (again!). This has become a strange and intriguing story and vaguely sinister. Once I'd got past my initial misgivings about the theme, I've found that I've enjoyed every word of it and it continues excellent. First class writing, Dito---you have every reason to be proud of your work.

paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdabout 4 years ago
The moment is now

Finally! The Kiss!

The journey has been exhilarating!

I am eager for more....

...patience? I have no choice but to be patient....

Erotic tension is building....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent Writing

So difficult to tell a story in two different time frames but you have done it superbly Dito. Loving the continuing tension. And finally, a kiss!

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