by elsanguine
about black men?. it stops this potentially good story from being about two people. Instead this reference made the story plunge into the overfull cesspit of racially inaccurate stereotypes. How many years have we got to keep going through the same old same old. Black men with limited or no personality being described only in terms of his sexual prowess and size of his package. Please this is getting old. I read chapter two as in chapter 1 I saw the potential for interesting plot and character development in what could be a good mystery read. I know there are many that will enjoy this read so I'm sure you'll carry on in this vein. There are others like me that will avoid this kind of interracial story
Just ignore what that person said. I think it's great! Much better than your first one.
When's the next one coming? I want to know what happened to that Astrea girl. But this scene is HOT!
Hey babe. You really gave my imagination some jolt there. Made me think about the kind of calls law enforcers should get. This rocks!
Hey elsanguine! (I really like your pen name!)
Do post the next episode soon! Usually i do not read stories that don't have the H next to it. But I got attracted to the title of your story and wondered if it had anything to do with art pieces and sex =p
And this was surprising! I want to know what happened to the murderer! Come on... post post post!
Hey elsanguine! (I really like your pen name!)
Do post the next episode soon! Usually i do not read stories that don't have the H next to it. But I got attracted to the title of your story and wondered if it had anything to do with art pieces and sex =p
And this was surprising! I want to know what happened to the murderer! Come on... post post post!
this is good. looking fwd to more of your writing =)Do post soon. I check yours among the others to see if there are any updates.
heavy between them, I thought that he was Hispanic, then it describes him as Black???